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[used]



something like 90% of dust is dead human skin


who, then,
    are these people swept unceremoniously away?


what stories are told in these discarded
layers,
    lines,
          and plump little piles in the corner of the windowsill?


this collection of sloughed skin
speaks of the time when his trembling fingers
wandered below her sweater
    (just before getting caught)
to discover what then was real…

                    this dirty residue is a reminder
                    of wicked games under covers,
                    of secrets, lies,
                    and forfeiture of virginities



[in the freshly polished wood it becomes easier to see
that the person wiped away


was me]


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Musing on things... not my best.

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  • Asabouros.
    October 8, 2008

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    Wow, even surrounded by so many obnoxious peers this has still managed to fill my heart with a sort of warm uncertainty and make my breath catch. This is really beautiful Wurthermore, I adore, Adore...J'adore <-french.

    "[in the freshly polished wood it becomes easier to see
    that the person wiped away


    was me]"



  • Artless
    October 3, 2008
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    This is a thinking piece, I like it.


  • csmmoms2
    October 1, 2008

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    Still very good

    Skin is best when it's been "used" and flakes to tracks showing the journey. Like scars...that one was this...that one took me there...this one meant (something). Life is like skin meant to be "used" it leaves a trail and you follow it back...and back...and foreward...and.