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8 Letter Word

You used to say all the right things.
Then suddnely you became mean.
The way you talked.
The way you walked.
When you were around me.
You said you loved me.
What a  bunch of crap.
I love you is an 8  letter word.
Then again.
So is
Bull Crap.

It's started out great.
You tried to come back .
But now it's to late.
I don't want to date a looser like you.
Screw you.

You used to say all the right things.
Then suddnely you became mean.
The way you talked.
The way you walked.
When you were around me.
You said you loved me.
What a  bunch of crap.
I love you is an 8  letter word.
Then again.
So is
Bull Crap.

Did everything I say mean nothing?

I'm tried of lieing,
of  crying.
Over you.

You used to say all the right things.
Then suddnely you became mean.
The way you talked.
The way you walked.
When you were around me.
You said you loved me.
What a  bunch of crap.
I love you is an 8  letter word.
Then again.
So is
Bull Crap.

Suddnely you became mean.
The way you talked.
The way you walked.
When you were around me.
You said you loved me.
What a  bunch of crap.
I love you is an 8  letter word.
Then again.
So is
Bull Crap.

I love you is an 8  letter word.
Then again.
So is
Bull Crap.

Author notes

This is not about any realtionship I'm in or was in.It's just another angry poem/song I wrote based on things I've heard .Ok.
so a tell me what you think.

Tell me what you think.please no bashing.

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Comments


  • CloudxAeris
    October 2, 2008
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    Why base things upon what you heard? Go by what is true!


    • Nickey Mouse
      October 2, 2008
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      I was mad when I wrote this.And the words just came to me so yea.