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window to the soul.



promises meant nothing;
broken more easily than breathing.
      -it was so contagious.


I looked through your flaws
because you were mine.



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"The beauty of a tree, is all the imperfections that glisten perfection, in a lovers eye" Stephanie Wood
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21 words.

to me it seemed that you meant that if you love someone you can look through their flaws and imperfections. I may have misinterpreted, but to me that's what it seemed like.

I hope it's what you're looking for.


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  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 19, 2008

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    oh, i like this very much
    and great ending. thanks for entering and take care
    Stephanie ♥


  • Curious LiLi
    October 11, 2008

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    I had so many different emotions run through me in reading only 21 words.
    Intense.
    It was very beautiful, and it tied into the prompt nicely!

    :]


  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 2, 2008
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    okays so here is your prompt:

    "The beauty of a tree, is all the imperfections that glisten perfection, in a lovers eye" Stephanie Wood

    if you dont think you can write for this, tell me and ill find something else