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Alone

You stand there
Your arms wrapped around me
Pulling me closer
Why are you doing this?
Why aren't you letting me reject you?
I want to be alone
Like I always do
Like I always am
I don't want to be close to you
Not to you
Not to anyone
Not even to myself
I pull myself out of your arms
And looked you in the eyes
It was all over
I ran back to you
And cried into your chest
You pulled me back into your warm hug
And never was I free again

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  • esimbf
    October 1, 2008
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    Wow see I told you that you would be got at poetry if you actualy tried,one hint though it looks nicer if you center it. you don't have to just a personal opinon. Other than that i was absolutly spectacular and utterly amazing. Keep on writing poems or I'll hit you over then head! =)