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I Want To Be With You

I want to be with you
Yes, it's true
I feel odd inside
There's no dening
I just wish you knew
You are one of the few
I really do care a lot about
I wish I could tell you
How I really feel
But I can't
I just wish you'd figure it out
I want to be with you

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  • Ephemerality
    October 1, 2008

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    Good write. The feeling of wanting someone who has no clue is a hard thing but hopefully they'll realize soon =]

    One thing, line 4, "dening" should be denying, which I know was probably just a typo =] Good work, keep penning.

    <3
    Steph