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Do What?

I see tomorrow is the day,
when time is moving fast
All you can eat buffet,
will never be surpassed

stamp out forest fires,
don’t sleep in the hay
The girl of my desires, 
Has gone so far astray

He’s extremely nonchalant,
about his cat’s sixth toe 
She’s a flaming debutant,
her love she will bestow

Coffee’s on the stove,
she seems to like it black
The oranges at the grove,
are frozen in their pack

With the nonsense I have left,
and the flowers on my toes
which I got from a theft
right under their nose

we have gone on for so long
I would like to leave her now
Knowing I must be strong
I’ll go out and get plowed



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Option #1 Be creative with your words and write a poem
that rhymes and doesn't make much sense.

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  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Best of luck


  • Poetess12
    October 4, 2008

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    I enjoyed this poem. It doesn't make sense and the rhyme is good. It fits the contest great.

    Thanks for your entry.


  • movedon
    October 1, 2008

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    i dont get it...but i think i like it that way

    mylee