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Trick or Treat

Dusk is creeping
around the corner,
the bitter scent
of the eerie moonlit air
fills me with hunger and greed
for night.
Bag in hand I stride
over the threshhold of my home
and into the gloomy night.
I approach the first house,
and gaze at it's massive front doors.
Slowly I watch my hand
push the cobweb covered doorbell.
The door opens with a groan,
Suddenly i'm looking into the
face of a witch!
She reaches with a crippled hand
into her pocket and produces
a chocolate bar.
Smiling ,
she ever so gently places it
into my palm.
She gives me a wave and sings
with a voice like a dove,
HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!

Author notes

I did a free verse poem and used the word banks. I hope it's all right that instead of "moonlight" I used "moonlit"
Hope you enjoyed my poem.

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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    November 19, 2008
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    Thanks for your entry

    Aww this is so cute lol. I really liked it. and hey, Chocolate, way to score lol.

    Thank you for entering. Good luck in the contest and thank you for following the rules.

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    Happy Halloween and God Bless
    Tammy