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Softer than wood

Missing image





It speaks only by things remembered
and like paper
is covered with ink from the struggles
that conclude with emotion ~


This piece of furniture
has become,
over time
a classic book

that has never finished saying

what it has to say.

Author notes

Credit goes to: http://xessencex.deviantart.com/art/Paint-me-a-golden-chair-58406035

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Comments

  • Judith Chandler
    October 15, 2008

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    I like the personification of the chair. "Never finished what it was going to say" reminds me of some people I've known.

    Congrats on the gold trophy.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    Wow, just stunning, this is such a beautiful interpretation of the prompt, excelled you have. Best to you in the contest


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    October 1, 2008
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    Like it was craving inspiration? Thank you for sharing.


  • Hadji Murad
    October 1, 2008
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    Wow
    Ummm

    Wow...
    There is nothing more to say?