A precious little boy
Sent to me from up above
A chance to learn
About unconditional love
He’s a perfect angel
The sparkle in my eye
When he’s up to mischief
He’s the devil in disguise
He loves to play
Everyday, all day long
He thinks he’s right
That he’s never wrong
Staring off into space
Daydreaming once again
All he wants in life
Is to be your best friend
He wears his heart
Upon his shirt sleeve
He has good manners
He always said please
When he wants a toy
He’ll scream and shout
It breaks my heart
When he starts to pout
I’ll give him the world
Just to see him smile
Because he’s a gift
He’s my son, my child
August 12 2008
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Very nice write...alot of love.
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Thank you for reading my poem. And Yes I do love my little boy. He is my world
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This is such a wonderful poem about your son, so full of love and admiration. Beautiful write, thanks for sharing and for your wonderful words about my poem i truly appreciate it
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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Thank you for reading my poem. I am glad that you like this one.
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This is so beautiful. How you write inspires me to be better at how I write, you have a natural gift that you truly excel at!
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Thank you Writing is very important to me and so is my family. when these to things are put together amazing stuff happen. If you read throught my poem you will see that it is about life on life's term. Once again my friend thanks for reading my poetry.
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I like it
This is really sweet, you can feel the love for the child come through, and I like that it's very real, it's not all about his being perfect, but it points out some of his human traits. I love the lines "when he wants a toy, he'll scream and shout, it breaks my heart, when he starts to pout" it's simple but any parent can relate to that feeling. -
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Thank you
I've read a lot of poetry about children and they all seem to be perfect so when I wrote this one about my son I wanted it to show that he is human. That it's okay to be just who you are. Thanks for reading but most of all thanks for the sweet comment.
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aww
how cute
beautiful
"I’ll give him the world
Just to see him smile
Because he’s a gift
He’s my son, my child"
i really love this poem
the first bit made me smile
a GREAT write
thanku for sharin
addie
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Thank you for reading my poem. It always makes me smile when I write about my children
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awww.this is so beautiful and put cheer and warm in my heart..the flow and rhyme in this is really strong. Sometimes overly personal poems aren't as strong because they are so personal, but you have managed to put your personal feelings and experience into a publishable and strong poem.
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Thank you. I dont know what else to say. I love writing about my life and my son.
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This poem is a very emotional one - there would be no proper words smeone could say to praise it
I'm glad you have your family
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Thank you
Yes family is awesome. Sometimes its hard especaily when you have two teenager and then a five year old, but i love them all. Thanks for reading this to means the world to me.
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Really lovely
And you DO know that's what it's all about.
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thank you for reading my poem. its all about love and showing the ones you love just how much you do love them.
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AWWWWW!
Wow! This is so beautiful and touching. I totally understand this kind of love between a mother and her son. I have two myself. They are precious gifts for sure. This is written very well, and has tugged at my heartstrings. Thanks for the uplifting words here. Blessings, Patty
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Thank you. i am a strong beleavier in what comes from the heart will reach the heart. I hope that when my son read this years later that he feels the love writen here.
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Thank you. i am a strong beleavier in what comes from the heart will reach the heart. I hope that when my son read this years later that he feels the love writen here.
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Oh..I just thought about the fact that this may be a father writing this. I know that bond is also very precious and strong between a father and a son. Sorry about that. Patty
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