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Conscience


Who are you,
I know who you are.

Who is she
I know who she is.

You are my husband.
The one without a conscience, without morals and without strength.  

The one who broke our wedding vows.


How long have you known her, slept with her? 

This other woman. 

The one without a conscience.

Is she younger, prettier does she connect with you, where I have not.

 

Do you share your dreams with her.

Those you do not share with me

 

The days are dark for me.

There seems no end in sight.


 

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  • mcw120588
    November 5, 2008

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    couple of "?" were missing throughout the middle. its well written emotional straight forward and stream of conscience feeling. excellent job thank you


  • Dark Otter
    October 3, 2008
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    Hi! I can't see any connection

    to the contest. I will have to remove it.