Cards, Cards, how exciting to play!
If I could, I would play cards everyday!
The satisfaction I get from winning the game
Often times drives my wild and crazy husband insane!
Gin rummy is the game we play
Oh, how I would love to play it everyday!
He loves to "frog" which I consider bland
That means he hold cards in his hand
Then with one swoop he lays them all down
Doesn't that always give me a frown?
What did you say? He beat me once more!?
That doesn't make me happy so let's play; not at all a chore!
Author notes
Elephant String
A contest entry
- Random-inoes! by The Green Elf.
450 points, ended November 13, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great write!I liked the first four lines the best!It was extraordinary!
♥B/P
Don't mind the image,it is my icon.
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abit off
You really seem to have forced alot of lines on this. Its a good poem and you have alot of emotion it just needs a little tweak.
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i like it
the first 4 lines the best
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