Eyes set on the moon
I trace its reflection upon the very sea
that contains my shed tears for you
that time I watched you walk away.
I remember many a-moon ago
when we used to sit under nights like these
feeling the velvet sky with outreached fingers
before they'd interlace while
we lay in the grass
so soft like a bed made for two.
Now the moon reminds me
of only your eyes when they radiated light
on the person you thought so beautiful -
it used to be me -
I used to be the one
you would set your sights on and they would glisten
so softly and beautifully...
I miss you
I miss how you looked at me
and I cry under the moonlight
as I remember that you look at her now
with that moonlit gaze
under the moonlit sky
and you'll sit many a-moon more
in grass fields, made for two
for her and you
and I will be alone under the night's sky
to remember the 'good old days'.
The moon is your joy
and, once mine,
now the moon paints a world of black and white
where I lay in the darkness
and the swallowing sea.
Author notes
um um um writer's block, yes it is 
Please tell me what you think
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This is very beautifully written. Your poetry is not bad. This is good for a person with writers block. That is usually when I personally put out my suckiest poems. LOL But this was full of emotion. Longing for a love lost. I love it! I enjoyed the read!!!
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Yay! Thank you!
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Yunie!! It's good to read your poetry again. Man I've missed your writing. I am glad I stumbled on this. You have got such a talent for words I wish you'd find more time for it This was lovely darlng. Sad, but lovely. Keep it up. I miss you!
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I miss you too hun!
lol and I would write more if I could think of something hahaha. I'll try XDDD
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bleh you don't miss me then.
Now i'm gonna tell everyone about your love affair for broccoli and ribbons 
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lmao i have noooo idea what you're talking about! *whistles with averted gaze* Oh look! Grass!
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And stop logging in anon. I'm gettig tired of having an online friend list since it looks empty at all times.
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Your writer's block is much more productive than mine. The stuff i came up with in the last few months is mostly quite sucky.
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No one would have ever known you had writer's block! This is a great piece! Full of sorrow and sadness but still a wonderful write!
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thank yoooooooou honey! XD
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this is a great porduct of wrtier's block then! it's so imagerific! you made me feel what she was feeling. great job yuna!
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thank you darling! XD
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Aww
What a sad tale!! I like how you took the experience and then repeated it but with him being with someone else.. added a very poignant sadness to this!
Excellent write hun!
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thank you hun!!! Now I'm playing the most inappropriate sad song and it's depressing me HAHAHAHA! lol
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