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“Modern Day Sleeping beauty”

“Modern Day Sleeping beauty”

Whatever happened to those bags we filled with our …desires?
                            Or was it fears?
“They were keeping you alive, last I heard.”
Oh, dreams never last anyways…
I believed in something one time
“don’t you think its time for a nap”
I cant quite recall waking up?
But we are sweating and Im not sure how those things work but..
“I think you’re beautiful, still. Don’t go expecting a kiss anytime soon”
I’m just sick of her haunting figure

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  • The Cube
    October 3, 2008
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    Very diggerent. A poetic conversation and definately gives a strong sense of darkness in it.