i
R
I
P
up my sides,
like they are a
R
A
G
DOLL
waiting to get tore apart.
i
go
cold...
letting my vains
R
U
N
dry.
i said this had to be the
L
A
S
T
time.
My wrists are dying...
i,
they
cant take it anymore..
Author notes
option 4..lianna27
A contest entry
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Comments
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It never IS the last time ... but sometimes it's hard to just let it go and not hurt yourself again, I know that pain.
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Wow...
Such imagery there....
I love how you say you'll do it 'one last time' and it really ends up being 'One Last Time'.
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Great poem, loved it. Keep up the good work! ^^
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AWESOME!
awesome poem! its really emotional
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its a good dirty pretty poem. loved it...
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a wonderfuly dp poem
with acheing need and pain written through it
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thank u for the comment!
-lindsay
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forgot these
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lol thank you so much!
love ya
-lindsay xoxox
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loving the dirty pretty babe, i think this is a great poem, very emotional, well done.
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amazing babe! love the dirty pretty
xoxo- christina
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aww thanks !!! u such a doll lol love ya
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ur welcome lol love you too sexy
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yay i b sexy lol (i had to hehehe)
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