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I'm A 'Real Live Woman'

 

 

 

Standing naked
feet slightly apart
smiling at the sight

 

turning sideways
running my fingers
over my belly
no longer flat, toned,
no sculptured flesh
just
wrinkles and stretch marks

a body that’s seen -
too many years

twirling slowly
looking over my shoulder
to see my reflection -
my legs,
always my best feature
long, tanned
standing on tiptoe
laughing out loud


“you’re a real live woman”

cupping my breasts
raising them slightly
thumbs brushing nipples

tensing

closing my eyes
the hardness pressing my palms

hands running the length of my body
pulling my stomach in
fingers brushing my mound
shivering, not from cold

 

but anticipation


feeling the warmth,
the wetness

remembering…

you


us

 

and longing

 

for tonight

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Lulu Gee silver member
    August 23

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    Oh, I say Sue.....very erotica and also very, very beautiful. Well done on the Gold.


  • Eric Marsh
    July 9

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    oh my god

    it wasn't you i met at the isle if wight festival when hendrix played....hahahaha,,,oh hang on oh sorry its my grots a bit twisted lol

  • WOW

    I recall back in my day that action as well lol. Very well done


  • Gibbo
    February 2

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    I think that your words are accurate, your thoughts are very human, and maybe I just might become a gold member!


  • Di Shirley
    January 26
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    excellent

    Thank you for the realization that we become more beautiful with age and wisdom. Di


  • Randomly Beautiful
    October 13, 2008

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    Nicely done. You managed to get me to envision the scene in my mind. You did well with erotica. I am also a real, live woman; stretch marks and all. My husband says they make me more beautiful to him. That when he sees them he is reminded of the beauty we have brought into this world. Thank you for this entry.


  • Legend silver member
    October 3, 2008

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    Sue you have no idea the images you have placed in this old head
    I watched each and every move with an excitement you created Little did you know that you were being observed

    Your Mirror

    hee hee not really
    an excellent write and a even better read Good luck in the contest


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    October 2, 2008

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    Extremely Sensual with an abundance of imagery--
    Well written & Versed with your continued mastery of penmanship!
    Well Done!


  • Ceridwens Soul silver member
    October 2, 2008

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    Suz this is a super piece of erotic poetry and you capture the beauty of 'woman' too. You took my breath away hun!!! Awesome xxxx


  • The Poetic Angel
    October 2, 2008
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    wow Sue that was awsome


  • breedluv gold member
    October 1, 2008
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    .......sizzle.........

  • Bad Bill
    October 1, 2008
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    Sexy and captivating--just perfect!

    Excellent work,
    Bill


  • arafura gold member
    October 1, 2008
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    Very hot!


  • Ceridwens Soul silver member
    October 1, 2008
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    Sensational Sis!!!!!!!!


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    October 1, 2008

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    This is fabulous!! This is beautiful and sensuous!!! You did a beautiful job!! I love the detail and description Sue!!! This is a Hott poem!!! I love it!! Great flow you have going here!!

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