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The world around


Too lonely in the perfect world of nature
Everything around has got its own stature
But I’ve forgotten the past I came from
And the old place I used to call home
All I got is this pinky-red hate
And little memories of my miss’s grungy cat
Yet, I plant my feet in this earthy world
Too stubborn to let my heart go cold
My legs are still strong to hold me
Yet, I don’t plan to stay in this world for eternity
I’ll just wait here for few months to come
And then turn to morning dew when I see the sun

Author notes

Credit goes to: http://xessencex.deviantart.com/art/Paint-me-a-golden-chair-58406035 as picture prompt.

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    This is such an interesting take on this prompt, you did this so very well. Best to you in the contest


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 2, 2008

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    WONDERFUL!!!!

    Wanting to start out into the world yet not quite yet! While waiting one remembers all the sweet and not so sweet memories.