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It.

Run.
Chase.
Run.
Chase.

No base to stop and take a breath, shout out time
out
He's running for the future.
She's running from the past.

Grass stains on tender blue jeans, a group of kids scatter on the count of
ten.

The culprit, the devil, the searcher, the chaser stands under a spotlight.

"It."

Always searching for a victim to leave behind.

Always someone lurking in the shadows, waiting to make you their newest catch.

A contest entry

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  • The Green Elf
    October 1, 2008

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    i'm guessing this is about a game close to tag. I loved your poem and hope you keep writing poems as well and awesomely random as these!


  • liduen silver member
    October 1, 2008

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    He he he...nice poem! I love the playfullness of this poem...and yet you still managed to keep it very intracate and powerful. Great job and good luck in the contest!