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Celtic lessons

Fire burning
Ember Shallow
Sitting in a pit
Celtic rain
With Crys of pain
As the Warrior
Who jumps
Into the battle
Early grave

Fire burning
Ember Shallow
Filling the nights sky
Clashes of metal
Tears of blood
As the Warrior
Finally dies

Kill the sweet
Keep the sour
With this Celtic rain
Rivers flow blood
Wind screams
Sharp broken dreams
War is always as it seems

Lovers withdraw
With shattered hearts
Beating freely
Now forever apart

Fire Burning
Ember Shallow
Jump into quickly
The swords blade is narrow!

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