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Why I Stray

Therein lies in every soul a light

Which binds the kindred humanity

To an eternal journey within the sight

Of the presiding spirit of the realms which are forbidden to see

Yet to live is to live among the many

Customs which dictate life in the this land

It is this very practice of which I loathe plenty

Because to me, the practice deems quite bland

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