When his eyes meet mine
My heart begins to speed
His very presents fills me
With overwelming need
He's my world, my everything
Nothing about him would I change
I wanna write the story of my life
With him on every page
He inspires me in ways
I never could have imagined
I dont understand it
But im truly glad it happened
I cant imagine life without him
He consumes my every thought
Everything comes natural
The love that cant be taught
He has given me his heart
And I have given him mine
From our very first kiss
our souls intertwined
Im addicted to him
His voice and his touch
I could spend every minuite with him
And it would never be too much
This feeling like no other
Sweeps me off my feet
I see stars and fireworks
Each time our lips meet
And when he holds me close
I melt in his arms
I cant help but fall for him
And all his enchanting charms
Im so happy to be his
And hope to be for life
To one day call him huband
And to love him as his wife
A contest entry
- Give Me Hope by sensualbutterfly.
575 points, ended October 6, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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I agree with the previous posters on this. This was a very beautiful and heartfelt write. You showed love in it's truest form. Passion and faithfulness, loyalty and hope. I hope you and him are great together and be happy forever. Keep up the excellent work and never let anyone tell you that you don't have the gift because you undoubtedly do in my opinion.
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Awwwww, this is really cute hun. You diffently put emotion into this.
I like it ^^
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Great Work!
Very moving poem! I love the passion you show in this poem and I beleive you put all your emotion in to it! Fantastic Writing! Could you please also comment on my poetry! Im new and would love feedback on my poems!
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Indeed everyone should have a love like yours! I try to keep my hope alive that I will someday find that as well! Thank you for sharing this and best of luck to you always!
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