Haiku for you, George
for porgy, pudding and pie.
You're in trouble now.
Author notes
Yes, I know he's a total idiot but he just looked so haggard on TV. Hope people don't think I'M an idiot for feeling this way. He is so totally unequal to the task.
A contest entry
- The Wall Street Fiasco in Haiku by NeedaMuse.
1400 points, ended October 5, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So, what's your opinion of this?
Comments
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Tickled
The first line was mostly wasted. The middle was first rate. The end was kind of blah.
Good job. Thanks for entering.
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JudyX3: From what I've seen no one in our government seems to be cabable of solving this problem, and they are supposed to be the smart ones!
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Oh but if your authors notes were only true! Watch, he won't be leaving office.The worse of weave has been concieved by Buldaburg and his admonsteration.
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good haiku, I loved authors notes
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