I Can't Wait To Be King,
king in my own house,
my own rules,
free to rule as I please,
Turn up the music,
and drown out the town,
they dont like it,
well im king now,
I'll eat whatever I please,
pies and cakes and steaks and ribs,
and dont charge me,
for the King eats for free,
Don't make King mad,
or off with your head,
ok so maybe just your pinky.
Author notes
XD i had the loin king song playing in my head now..XD 
A contest entry
- Titles and Options Contest! by movedon.
950 points, ended October 7, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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At least I'm not the only one that had the Lion King going through my head. I read the title, and the tune came straight away. I like this because it's kind of silly. It made me laugh
And, now this is really going to shock you, I have one bit of grammar I would like to point out:
"well im king now," to "well I'm king now,"
You make me want to move out, though. That way, I can blare me (only partially geeky) classical music as loud as I want to
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hahahahahhahahah
I love this! Beautiful job...HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!! I cannot wait to move out! sounds lovely from the way you put it! thanks for taking the time to enter and best of luck!
ing alone,
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I think that's the dream of every teenager living under someone else's roof. I cracked up at the last line. It was hysterical. Good luck in the contest!
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LOL, thats awesome Phil!!! LOVE it!!! I cant wait to be able to blair my music, movies, whatever either :-P
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