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Just a Litttle 'Unwell", oh well---

I cannot be more than what I am made of,
but I refuse to be less than I am.
The strenghth of my weakeness
is the courage on which I stand.
Think not ill of me
when in sarcasm I retort,
I have a devil larger than most
feeding on my mind when it's lost.
When it devours, the cost is vast.
But I always survive,
I have in the past.

It is the lasting compassion of friends
that pull me out;
like a 'camel through the eye of a needle

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  • miss-princess
    October 15, 2008
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    Great write good luck in the contest


    • plainoljoe
      October 15, 2008
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      miss princess, a fun write full of personal truth. Thanks for making room for me

      Joe


  • dame de la riviere
    October 2, 2008
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    I like the tenacious tone of this piece...as we say in N.O. "Yeah you right darlin'!"


  • Tears of Roses
    October 2, 2008

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    wonderful filled with your heart
    friends we can never have to many
    Roses to you

    Teresa

    • plainoljoe
      October 2, 2008
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      Well Teresa, a person really can have too many friends. Itakes a lot of memory and patience wen they all show up at once, lol


      Joe


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 1, 2008
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    Your courage is admirable Joe and I can't ever imagine you retorting with sarcasm!

    Much love

    • plainoljoe
      October 2, 2008
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      jacks, there has been and will be again my sarcasm has more than singed feathers---but never, ever yours!!!!.

      I'm not courageous, just hard headed and determined.

      Joe

      • kiwigirljacks gold member
        October 2, 2008
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        You could never ruffle mine Joe as I would always understand any downtimes...

        And hard headed and determined IS courageous! Or so I'm told lol.. I'm the same! lol

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