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~Ambiance~

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Liquid gold bathes the landscape,
that drenches me in heady perfume.
Cast from a melodramatic display,
born of mother nature's womb.

As the plumage of a male bird,
in strikingly glorious attire,
so, the trees in grand exhibition,
with vivid vestige, they conspire.

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Deep burgundy crimson, lofty mace yellow,
mottled orange with crisp scarlet veins.
A vision to drink in with one's eyes,...
a symphony of color in sweet refrains.

A tympanic melody, in great crescendo,
I silence to hear the rustle in the breeze.
The sound of crickets' vibrato so near,
signaling Autumn's final descent, their pleas.

Fragrance pierces every open pore of the skin,
in sweet bouquet of this tantalizing delight.
Full of gusto and life's most perfect blend,
to titillate the senses and passion ignite.

The grandeur of such ecstasy now culminates,
In a season of harvest and mirth.
Tasting upon one's tongue her richness,
The flavors of a great and bountiful earth.

Ripe in the wealth of fruits that bare,
are blue clusters of grapes and golden corn,
as Nature spews her blessings in all that's good,
with abundance, her beating heart, to adorn.

With open hands, I feel her glory seep in,
to the very depths of my soul.
The very ambiance that saturates life at it's peak,
is the gift that autumn does extol.
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Author notes

option #3 using the 5 senses to describe autumn
pics- kazytc
a different photobucket of autumn girl{not contest's autumn girl}

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  • Kathraina silver member
    December 12, 2008
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    The imagery in this piece is beautiful. Wonderful job!


  • TabbyJoy
    October 28, 2008

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    You truly have captured all of my senses with the rich imagery used iwithin this piece. Thanks for the entry.


  • perfectsunset gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Wow this was such a beautiful write.
    Filled with such stunning imagery,
    great visuals and descriptions of
    Autumn. I could taste, feel, smell,
    touch and see all the beauty
    of Fall within your poem.

    You did an amazing job at conveying this.

    Thanks for sharing & best of luck


  • Kazytc
    October 1, 2008

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    Wow This is fabulous Grace!

    This is sooo beautiful Grace, well done, I am so honoured that you used my pics, thats great they look lovely and they enhance your wonderful poetic masterpiece.
    Lovely sentiments and rich on poetic graphics and descriptives as always, you have crammed them in.
    You never cease to amaze me with your poesm they are a poetic work of art and always Poet laureate standard too.

    Love these unusual words..

    Deep burgundy crimson, lofty mace yellow,
    mottled orange with crisp scarlet veins.
    A vision to drink in with one's eyes,...
    a symphony of color in sweet refrains.

    How beautiful, wow, sensational! Love it, well done Grace, go you!
    Poetic Hugs,
    Kaz.
    Kazytc xxxxx