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Psychotic Exhileration

with only a thought
a memory lost to time
it's the power trip I feel
within the psyche of my mind

I'll close my eyes, inhale deep
to know just what couldn't be
another moment passes by
and it's emptiness I see

ever so slow, the sting sets in
and this smile I've become
for in my lonely waking hour
my soul has come undone

one more mark, to feel the peace
it's fatal rejuvination
taste the essence of my pleasure
it's a psychotic exhileration

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it truly takes one to know what the meaning is behind this poem- if you know, you know- if not then it doesn't matter

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  • Stardust-luvr
    October 19, 2008
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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 1, 2008

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    Victoria Annette Lambini!!! Not a chance you are getting away with this and not getting yelled at! I know PERFECTLY what this means- been there- and it is not acceptable. Better be thoughts that have past and not something going on now. And damnit- it does matter. I love you, and need you around...got it?

    Storm