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A Metaphor

Am I the crooked spoon?
The one that falls down
the one that looks into the moon?
How about you?

Are you the fork?
The one who runs away
The one who laughs at the stork?
What about us?

Are we the shattered Plate?
Unable to hold it all
The ones who can't see our fate?
What are we?

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  • xXxMandy-pantsxXx
    October 25, 2008

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    This Reminds me of a poem manson wrote a long ass time ago just the spoon an fork thing "When the fork eats the spoon and the knife stabs the face reflected in the plate, ...Dinner is done" idk sorry i think any time a spoon is mentioned lol