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Torture Till Dawn

Tantalizing teasing touch
Flirtatious, playful stance
Each time we spend an hour near
We tiptoe through this dance

I know my image plagues your dreams
After each day we've seen
Just as your body enters mine
As if we've lovers been

Your voice it sends a gentle thrill
Cascading through my bones
And night time brings fantastic heat
In daylight can't condone

But fantasies are safe enough
To torture me till dawn
And when the morning comes again
My true face will be shown

I know that lovers we won't be
Our teases are just play
But in the night, my tortured dreams
It is with you, I lay

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 14, 2008

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    Very well done

    Sometimes the body needs the dream to play out for the feeling of love from another it helps us find our way through what is sometimes a cruel world indeed


  • movedon
    October 1, 2008

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    I'm glad you loved the prompt because I LOVED this poem! Very well written. The Rhyme didn't seem too forced, which always helps. The flow was easy to follow as well! Thanks for entering! I hope you enter more of my contests, as this one is beautiful and lovely!

    ing alone,
    Mylee


  • movedon
    October 1, 2008
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    Torture Till Dawn

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