Holding onto dreams
promised shadowing
beneath the crust held
rocky,no more fairytales.
Author notes
13 words
Artist prompt: http://oki-oki deviantart.com/art/imaginary-friends-84873128
A contest entry
- 13 words by AutumnGypsy.
450 points, ended October 8, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You have done and said so much here with so few words, most impressive imagery here. best to you in the contest
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Very nice. You say a lot with a few words. You leave much to the imagination. I think you are saying, time for reality. Thanks!
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Thank you
Thank you for the wonderful comment and nice response to reading my poem. Saddie23
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This is excellent poetry in its brevity but I would certainly like more in this challenge. Thanks for your time. I am going to disqualify this one, and ask that you search your works, and try to submit one that you may think is your very best. Sorry! It appears that some may simply be entering their prewrites without pre-thought. That may not be the case here but I really think you have something more poignant in that collection to enter in this contest. Please take a look at the poem I have in my finalist list so far.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4617427
Hope you consider adding something else here.
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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This is well written. Short but full of imaging words. Thank you for sharing. In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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Thank you
Thank you for the warmest comment given. I'm glad you liked the poem. The applaudes are a welcome. Saddie23
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