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Visions ( HM )

Signals sent in messages,

reached and touched,

heartfelt,

ever melting,

through the eyes of the believer.

 

Blinded once a fool,

rose spectacle's hides the full picture,

yet inside..

one see's beyond,

what was truly hidden from view.

 

Looking, searching..

vein hopes,

to friendship now found,

in systems that flood,

cast not the one who cares, aside.

 

Visions lie within,

screen cleansed,

washing away the dirt that lay upon the ground,

and fresh new buds blossomed,

as did our friendship.

 

 

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for you Kat x

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 10, 2008

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    this poem in my eyes is brilliant. your words paint a picture all of their own. you're truly a gifted writer. this poem touched me in many ways and on many levels. I sat here reading it over and over, soaking it all in. friendships to me are important just as important as breathing. to me they are essential to becoming the best that each of us can be. the imagery through out this poem is fantastic. and this is another one of my favorite prompts. beautiful and loving all the way through it.

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • daviscth silver member
    October 6, 2008

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    I love the imagery in your words sis. Good luck in the contest.


  • maralisa silver member
    October 6, 2008

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    julie a very beautiful poem I love your sentiments of friendship you have created true bonds of harmony in your words good luck in the contest my friend take care marina


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    Aww such beatutiful sentiments here, friendship is a powerful thing, and not something to be taken lightly. A stunning write Good luck


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 2, 2008
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    http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll272/Temptress41/Love/Love-Card-62.jpg

    here is the link to your prompt. let me know if this works for you or not

    kat

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