Flesh intertwined with nature's balance,
manipulating folklore,
transcending momentarily, touching beauty,
released temporarily ravishing in serene inhalations.
Senses numbed by captivating wonders,
astounding arrays of colors and smells
enchanting desires.
Author notes
Visual: “The Autumn Lagoon” by frozenstarro
30 words
A contest entry
- PIF Visual by Gypsie Ink.
400 points, ended November 9, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a really good piece. I love the imagery you have created within this piece.
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"released temporarily ravishing in serene inhalations."
I love this line a lot. this poem is exceptional and I really love it. I missed reading your poems.
Beautiful poem sissy.
god luck
kat
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Enchanting piece
It breathes as your words unfurl
Best wishes in the contest hun
Julie
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