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" But while they prate of economic laws, men and women are starving. We must lay hold of the fact that economic laws are not made by nature. They are made by human beings ."  ++

Franklin D. Roosevelt, 32nd President of the United States.


Clouds are flying

Soldiers dying

Families weep

Politicians steep

Brewing mischief

In gold so deep

Have their hearts ever cried?




Author notes

For more information about homelessness, please click on the following Google Links:

http://www.nchv.org/

http://www.google.com/search?sourceid=navclient&ie=UTF-8&rls=RNWO,RNWO:2008-24,RNWO:en&q=%3Chomeless+youth%3E

http://www.google.com/search?sourceid=navclient&ie=UTF-8&rls=RNWO,RNWO:2008-24,RNWO:en&q=Homeless+Veterans

http://www.local.com/results.aspx?keyword=Veterans+Organizations&location=Seattle+Wa

http://www.historylink.org/index.cfm?DisplayPage=output.cfm&File_Id=1757

http://www.lyricsbay.com/tenting_tonight_on_the_old_campground_lyrics-unknown.html

http://www.google.com/search?sourceid=navclient&ie=UTF-8&rls=RNWO,RNWO:2008-24,RNWO:en&q=%3CHomelessness%3E

++ http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/authors/f/franklin_d_roosevelt.html

http://www.google.com/search?sourceid=navclient&ie=UTF-8&rls=RNWO,RNWO:2008-24,RNWO:en&q=homeless+families

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  • parachute fog
    October 30, 2008

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    overly simplified to the point of it not actually having any profound effect, im usually a strong fan of minamilistic delivery and fante styles

    however it's not explaning or articulating anything that has not been conved in a similar way before?

    yes soilgers are dying, in iraq & afghanistan, just like they died in somallia, koera, germany, falklans, and most places in the world? what about the million dead in iraq? as estimated by iraq body count? or was that conveyed through
    "famlies weep" ?



    • Clovis...Curious silver member
      October 30, 2008
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      I understand your point quite well, however, as a Senior Citizen, I am concerned about all the military personnel and innocent civilians that are killed in wars that benefit only the munitions makers. You might like to review not only the comment of Franklin Delano Roosevelt, at the top of this page, but also, click on each and every link, which I provided, to illustrate the meaning of this poem.
      You see, former President Roosevelt, not only created the Social Security System of America, he was one of the several statesmen, from various countries, that brought World War II to an end, brought America out of the Great Depression, and exposed, for the whole world to see the horrors of the Holocaust of Adolf Hitler.
      However, please feel free to continue to comment on my poetry, because I appreciate any and all input from whomever.


  • spideracer gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    It flows really well

    Another great write on the plight of those homeless many, so few words, so much pain. If only politicians would just do, and not just say, than we may see a different beast surface from the shadows.


    • Clovis...Curious silver member
      October 21, 2008
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      Thank you for your thoughtful comments; compliments and applause. I do appreciate.


  • Confusedboy
    October 3, 2008

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    I doubt they have. When they are in front of the cameras, they are filled with anguish amd pain about it all. wonder if they later chuckle. Words are just words, if no action attached.


    • Clovis...Curious silver member
      October 3, 2008
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      Thank you for your thoughtful comments; compliment and applause.
      I do appreciate them, my friend.


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    October 1, 2008

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    Amazing job with this one here!!! This is fantabulous!!! Your words are clean and crisp!!! Your lines and words have a most excellent flow!! I love the feeling that you put into this!! You did a beautiful job!! I LOVE IT!!

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