It is a perfect portrait you drew
Every line is a secret whisper of your name
On this tall tree the colors are perfectly made
And the flowers at the roots make the picture great
The sun, the moon and the stars
And every little part
I’m so amazed by your heart
That drew such beauty in six (seven) days
The stony nature-made steps on this mountain
And the small drops the sky cries
Are all so perfect for human eyes to see
And yet, here we are messing the perfect picture up
A frameless picture you drew
But as a God you never needed to
Put a frame for your colors will never mix up
They’ll stay apart, yet together
Until you decide the end of forever
And all join you there above
Author notes
Contest prompt:
Oh God ! the beauty of your art makes me speechless...Unknown.
In this line "That drew such beauty is six (seven) days" I put 'seven' in the brackets because the time God took to create earth varies from religion to another (as I heard) so I didn't want anyone to get mixed thoughts and added both 'six' and 'seven'.
Thanks for reading! 
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A contest entry
- the beauty... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended October 14, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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You send chills to arizona with your soulfull writing,,thanks for sharing
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beautiful!
the words discribed such a beautiful picture of this world...i really enjoyed every line. well written and full of essence of nature snd its beauty for us to always remember..thanks for sharing!
juliet
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You have well described the skill and the beauty of HIS blessings and HIS portrayes of this world..I love the immageries and the refrences put in HIS praise..thanks for sharing such a wonderful write..
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really lovely..enjoyed it
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You have really painted such a lovely picture with your words. I guess I have never looked at it in terms of a beautiful picture but what you write is very true. I honestly think that this poem calls for very little revision. I love the last few lines. You always seem able to end your poems well.
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very interesting write. I definitely see religious aspects in this. You use imagery well here.
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