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Thank you

When you came into my life
my heart was so unsure
unwilling to let myself go
I didnt want to hurt anymore

Your soul so peaceful and pure
your soft smile snd laughter soothes my heart
you gave me so much love
more than could understand
how could I have been so lucky
to have stumbled on a love so true

You opened my heart and soul
my life is full because of you
I cant keep you forever
It has hurt so much to set you free
because you always understode me

I love you still
but thank you for being in my life

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  • Nardiarrrg
    October 16, 2008
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    hmmmm....

    EPIC


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 6, 2008

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    Ah..the gratitute itself is the beauty of the love in this heart warming piece..you touched me a lot..well done..and thanks for sharing it...