you don't love me
you absolutely don't love me
you cut yourself and hurt yourself
if you loved me you would not
do you think i don't love you
if you do your wrong
i kiss you and hold your hand
but every day i see more cuts
i can help you
help you stop
i will miss you
i will do anything to stop you
i am afraid for you
suicide is not the best for you i know it
you can do so much with your life
learn to cope with your feelings
talk to a counselor
i am afraid for you
i will die without you
i know you will die without me
i need you in my life now and forever
stay with me
stay with me
i need you now
i need you later
i will miss you
i will kill myself
now i see more cuts not just on your wrists
now also on your ankles and chest
you need to stop now
i will hurt myself if you keep it up
i know you don't want that
i know it
now you are dead
on our 6th year
i miss you
i will die
die in 3 months
i still miss you
everybody does
i am dead now with you
i don't miss you anymore
Author notes
i think it works for the contest because it has almost everything you want exept alot of rhyme.
A contest entry
- Emolicious by UnicornSparkleVomit.
428 points, ended December 1, 2008, 6 entries
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i love the poem but it does not have rhymn and i need that for the contest. very good poem though
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This was very well-written. It flowed well and I liked the meaning.
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Wow..I love it!
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thanks i apreciat it my name is ariana whats urs
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this is uhmazing...
i feel this way to.
this has to be one of my faorite poems ever.
im katelynn by the way whats up?
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WOW I know exactly how this feels It Is not fun to have someone you love willingly hurt themselves its painful. This was an amazing write keep It up!!
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