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Fade To Black~

Missing image




I just want


to run


leaving petals in my path
to wilt

love's
lingering
scent~



footsteps falling
away from flutter

and into shadow's arms



someplace where dreams

fade
to
black

and shadows keep me company
while the moon hides it's glow


in someone else's sky.~




♥



~

Author notes

"something to help me ~feel~ again.
I am looking for sadness, pain, desperation, heartbreak..."


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  • ea silver member
    October 28, 2008
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    "the moon hides its glow in someone else's sky" is such a poignant admission of love lost.


  • Frozentearz
    October 19, 2008

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    Congratulations on your award, the pain the sadness and deperation is well written within your amazing words.
    Warm hugz across the miles.
    Frozentearz


  • PerfectImperfection
    October 14, 2008

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    Ooooh well I may have clicked from your page, but lets hope it makes me get my butt to judging this eh? I adore this sis - so very beautiful in its sadness, something that I most certainly can feel without a doubt - and relate far too well. Beautiful! Thank you so much for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!


  • jackreed3 gold member
    October 10, 2008
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    Interresting Poem... ..
    I like the ballence you made of the Promp.. Nice...
    JackReed3


  • jasminerose
    October 4, 2008

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    So beautifully penned with intense emotions pulling at the heart.
    Exellent as always!
    Jazzy


  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    well you certainly got me feeling the sadness and heartbreak in the words. you write as passionately about the loss of love as you do the glory of finding it and welcoming it into your heart. great job dear cuz


  • poppa
    October 1, 2008

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    wow... you even write sad beautifully lovely take on this picture and wish you well in the contest


  • Fug-azi
    October 1, 2008

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    Hey sis its good to see you stepping into the darker side of things every so often and I must say you have a talent for the sadness.


  • BluRosePoet8488
    October 1, 2008

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    Lynda,
    Wonderfully done, girl! I like this. The title is what drew me in and then once here, I started to read... WOW! It matches with the pic perfectfully. Keep the ink flowing and good luck! Love and hugs...
    ~Donna~

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