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We Never Forgot

After the tastes are gone,
And the smells blend together,
All the things we forgotten,
Stays within,

When faces grow wrinkled,
And when the child fades forever,
All the dreams we held dear,
Hold strong,


After the laughs have faded,
And the tears have blurred into forgotten memories,
All that's left are the things,
Our hearts are too stubborn to forget,

Author notes

The last stanza is from a Youtube comment, i thought it was beautiful so i added, im probably going to change/add to, it later.

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  • x1maggot1x
    October 1, 2008
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    WOW

    This is a nice poem, written very well. Nice job, it really expresses you. And that' kool.