The night sleep eluded my eyes
you were there watching over me.
giving to me warming comfort
from heaven on high soothing me.
You were there watching over me,
filling my heart with tender love.
showing me that I'd be okay.
my eyes finally found slumber.
Giving to me warming comfort
sheilding me from today's heartaches.
helping me along life's hard road
your hand in mine along the way.
From heaven on high soothing me
my heart now knows you're always near
wrapping me gently in your love
together we'll walk hand in hand.
Author notes
Retourne
Each line eight syllables, the second line of verse one is the the first line of verse 2. The third line of verse one is the first line of verse three. The fourth line of verse one is the first line of verse four.
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Excellent
Aww, this is amazing and so very well done. Thank you for sharing.
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I know exactly what this is about and you know I have the same thoughts about my Tim. Bravo!
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Wow~
I don't believe I have tried this form but love how You presented this
You make it seem so darn easy
Oh My~
Is there a form You have not tried
Oy!~!
Another treat to inhale
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Talent~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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oh yes! there are many forms I have yet to try but do enjoy trying the new ones... And yes, this form is easy. ( I think anyways)...
Love ya
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Beliefs
Such wonderfull belifs I do envy. For one to know that He is there wtching bover you seems so comforting> even I smiled dear poet.
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Very nice write here
Often you can see love within each person so given over the years we wear it for all to see . And in that blessing often reflect for others not so fortunate to
be drawn to us in hope of us shedding some of our light upon them to show them the way
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I love the Retourne and you took the form and used it so powerfully. This is strong, beautiful, emotional and perfectly penned. Bravo!
Love,
Amera♥
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There you go again, writing these amazing masterpieces.
You really blow my mind when you write in your fancy styles. This is the most beautiful poem. Your ending
was so touching. I loved the whole thing.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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The cyclic writing emphasizes the soothing text. Crafted and measured while being gentle and easing us into calm. Thanks!
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Yes God always watches over us no matter what!!! This is lovley!!! Your words are so soothing and sweet!!! This is an incredible write!! Your words are beautiful!!! You have an amazing flow!!! Your background is perfect!!! I LOVE IT!!
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This is beautiful. I love the format, it really ties it all together. Well done!
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Thanks hon. This one is quite close to my heart, as it holds a deep personal meaning to me. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Such a beautiful background and the poem.
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