I wasn't always like this
This woman nearing psychosis
I used to believe, with all my might;
That fairytale bullsh*t, "love at first sight."
The magic and power encased
in a butterfly kiss upon my face.
Ha!
Then I met him.
Sexy, tall and slim,
vision of a god in those tight jeans
He would be my King and I, his Queen.
That is, until he found his mistress
In my baby sister's kisses
That, I wish I hadn't witnessed.
I digress.
One relationship after another all ending in a total mess.
I've established new belief in love;
Smoking in my black lace gloves...
Author notes
Option 4- 102 words....
A contest entry
- Black and White Images by silverscent.
525 points, ended October 7, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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Nice write...
Nice job... Gritty, blatantly honest, the making of a Bitch. You should do a part 2, of how she turns out after her new belief in Love
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Awesome it's all evil and kewl and it fits the picture perfect keep up the good work
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wow, this is wicked and still managed to turn out to be sexy...so much of wishing on fairytales...I tend to have fairytale tendencies, damn
but the second part is unexpexted and gritty
I've established new belief in love;
Smoking in my black lace gloves...
I love these lines!
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Hehe!! ur so cute!! Glad u liked it hon!!
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WOW...nicely...wrote....
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Thank u Free!
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hon i love this piece it spoke things that most writers in general wouldn't throw out there about the stages of relationships and so on nice job beatiful good luck in the contest
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Thank u sweetness!!
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