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drifting

slowly the chill drifted over
spilling waters and I dreamed
of your soul in forgotten moments
before the lily

I knew the impending winter would
never enter our autumn lagoon

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by frozenstarro

30 words

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  • White Tiger 96
    October 1, 2008

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    I think you did a good job! It is a very well written poem. I look forward to reading more from you. I wish you luck! GOOD JOB!!!!!Smile