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Butterflies

funny

  that stomach roll
    that churns in me

  whenever you walk into my presence.

i should be used to you by now,

  yet still i tremble

    when my reason for being
        steps into the room.

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  • Puppydog gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    SO SWEET!!!!!

    Oh, how those butterflys would flutter around in my stomach! Have not had that feeling in a very long time.


  • Simply Olivia
    October 1, 2008
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    I had thought that this poem would be about 'real' butterflies, lol; but this is good too