You’ll light up the night,
before you’ll ever see a star.
Gliding circles over our galaxy,
rivers steam up cold smiles and
indigo expressionism.
Forever lapping up molten lollipops
framed by industrial-sized questions.
Intimate moments stained with grief,
not any less than worthwhile
+Plus a few billion erratic heartbeats.
Another wayward ride to a place I don’t belong.
Pixilated formalities and an
inappropriate last eye meeting.
X
x
X
I am in this lock and loaded race one more,
erasing the ending for an improved untruth.
Author notes
Short. To the point.
I like it.
Written: September 17th, 2008
A contest entry
- rawr I want good love poetry!!!! by Live with a passion.
600 points, ended November 15, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Gorgeous. Second and third stanzas are my favourites, but the whole thing was really... just wow. You've left me speechless; I can't quite find words to describe this.
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good stuff I'm feelin it
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I like it too.
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<3
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