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autumn season

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the four seasons set
spring 1 http://allpoetry.com/poem/4636323
summer 2 http://allpoetry.com/poem/4643177
autumn 3 http://allpoetry.com/poem/4643303
winter 4 http://allpoetry.com/poem/4650979

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  • Cindy
    October 8, 2008

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    That bridge is just precious and I like the colors. I really cannot tell what the border is though, maybe it is just a bit too blurry. I think this one would be great without the border even, either way, nice design! Thank you for entering


  • countrybabe gold member
    October 2, 2008

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    Not Bad At All

    I don't mind this background at all...but again with the left align thingy. (Sorry just trying to be constructive) Anyways, very nicely done. Good luck in the contest.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    October 1, 2008

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    A light colored font would look better on this.
    The mix of illustrations and photos on the border doesn't grab me. The deer picture appears stretched vertically.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    Aw Autumn, now in this season, and that little hedgehog is so cute
    Love the bridge and the softness of the leaves..
    Best wishes hun
    Julie