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Just another night

Head pressed against the rocky road
Fingers clawed scattering stones
Tripped by one sip too many

Lay quiet now and rest awhile
Sink below the stony road
Fade into gentle blackness

Dawn's pale flames burn the night
Weary eyes unveiled in pain
She stumbles into another day

Sorry, we don’t bury the living

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  • penman gold member
    October 2, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.