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The Soul of Wine

 

The Soul of Wine is incompatible
With wretched men who long with such deep taste
That they destroy the Cup and lay to waste
The very thing that makes them Crucible.
The Poet's tongue, though reprehensible,
Will find, through consecration, what is chaste:
A black and endless pit, the mortar's paste:
A maw of pearls, incorruptible.

And to those lips I pray that I may see
The blind unfolding of an angel's wings:
A dove of milk in chaliced mystery.
Whoever drinks of this shall know the sea
As it appears in nature when it brings
A Crux of Light through tides of misery.

 

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  • Night Hope gold member
    November 16
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    This poet's tongue could wrap itself around any common word and make it an extraordinary one. Such talent spilled from his pen on a regular basis.



  • Mairi bheag gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    It is always a pleasure to find a formal poem, perfect in execution, but in which there is an undoubted flow, which shows that the form carries the poem without constraining it.

    This deserves its place in the top ten poems in the contest.

    I also like the way it is presented, as though simply typed.

  • Vera Rich
    November 23, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my "Celebrating Poetry and Poets" competition. I am placing this on my short list, and hope to complete my judging within the next 36 hours.


  • emi
    November 18, 2008

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    Wow. A beautiful sonnet, shining amidst all the ""free"" verse I've been reading on AP today


  • Lololololol123234
    November 17, 2008
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    I love the imagery of this poem, It makes me think..


  • Melodies
    November 14, 2008

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    Wonderfully written, fine scribe.

    A smart poem that represents a mind filled with wonders. I admire the imagery and fine adjectives, good Sir.


  • trekkergirl
    November 14, 2008

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    ahhh what the sacared wine doesn't do to people. This is an excellent write with some very good imagery and it flows well. You did a good job. thanks for sharing this with us.


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    November 13, 2008
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    I love it!!


  • BlancetNoir gold member
    November 13, 2008
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    A deeply satisfying read

    Lots of visuals to savor.


  • XXxFAKExXx
    November 13, 2008
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    aww, beautiful<3


  • Kari gold member
    November 13, 2008
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    This is stunning


  • Nicolette gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    Brilliant, classical poetry...to be read with a glass of fine wine and in the warm glow of a fire...

    ~ Nicolette


  • cricketjeff gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    There are not enough great sonneteers on AP, finding another is always a wonderful treat.

  • carole21
    November 13, 2008
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    interesting write . .


  • Amera gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    Every poem I come to of yours is better than the last. Very few people can compose a Petrarchan sonnet much less compose a good one.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Maatkara gold member
    November 11, 2008

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    I ditto Margaret's comment. This is wonderful, you are a true poet (a rare breed)!


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    November 9, 2008

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    love the style in this, i can imagine reading this from a red leather-bound volumn, hair undone under a willow..lol, don't ask.


  • MargaretG
    November 1, 2008

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    These are pearls VG, one has to have seen misery to know the light. You have a grand way with metaphor and allusions, classical style.


  • Grunts Girl silver member
    October 31, 2008

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    i love wine.
    i am usually messed up on wine on fri and sat evenings... it is only 3pm here so i am safe for now...


    i got the feeling that wine wasnt good enough for those men... this reminded me of all we waste
    all the beauty that gets destroyed...
    and then ... you find hope by unfolding angel wings --- the blindness of it reminds me almost of a turned eye...
    anyway, i liked where this took me..
    unique write definately!


  • just mercedes gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    I had to find the Third.

    Now I am satisfied with the balance of them all, and pleased by your images. What I respond to most, I guess, is the search, and the individual's refusal to accept less than the real, the light glimpsed beyond the veil.

    I like the sifting back for truth, whether beauty or love, and the primal images.

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