We came flying down, like a singing bird
Singing the moment, this will never come again,
Black and white, nervousness creeps in,
Holly sweet...get a grip...
Lights in the car in the park,
And I ain't looking down for the rest of the night
Your lovely stare keeps my head up
Come and smile, please stay here a while,
This is our chance, shuffle with a glance,
When this is done
behold a greatest memory to treasure
We were shaking together hand in hand
Eyes closed
Falling over love and a sweet romance,
I never thought it could come down to this,
I'm falling, get ready
For the first sweetest kiss...
Author notes
Kara.... option 3.
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Comments
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Very romantic and beautiful! I like this a lot! Good luck and thanks for entering!
Sydney -
awww this is beautiful =] and romantic I remember my first kiss... lol anyway I really like this :] I love how you put them into little colums and the way the poem flows and the rhyme is awesome my favorite lines were"We were shaking together hand in hand
Eyes closed
Falling over love and a sweet romance,
I never thought it could come down to this,
I'm falling, get ready
For the first sweetest kiss... " good luck in the contest and thanks for entering
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