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Into the Waters So Deep

I look for love,
Love for keeps.
On the day
That Autumn keeps,
A love for winter.
Before the world sleeps.
Where love waits for me.

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"The Autumn Lagoon" by frozenstarro

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  • Sandygram silver member
    October 2, 2008

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    Wonderful My Friend

    Your words are sweeet and caring. Your words always bring a smile. Wonderful poem to start my day with. Big Hugs and Smiles. Time for our milk and cookies.

    Take care,
    Sandy


  • poetryality silver member
    October 1, 2008
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    There is beauty painted into a picture here dear friend. Your words are soothing! Your light always shines with love. Simply Beautiful! I wish you well in this challenge, and want to take time to say THANK YOU for being such a generous supporter of my poetry.

    Always ♥

    Renee


  • Katie Lazette
    October 1, 2008

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    Wow, mac, this is great. I really like the lines Before the world sleeps, Where love waits for me. Maybe I'll get out my mittens and boots (grin). Katie