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Feeling youth


Bewitched by twilight moments

 

lost in awe,

until your  hands forgot

 

my youth.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    October 3, 2008

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    Sensual

    I felt a sensual undercurrent here that was electrifying. I was taken back to a time when I remember those same hands...been a long time ago though lol! Thanks for sharing and congratulations on the trophy. -mandie-


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 1, 2008
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    beautifully penned... x


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    Well this sounded very sad to me.Amazingly skillful wording in this.
    All the best in the contest
    Gaylene


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    This is just amazing you have left this open ended for the reader to draw their own conclusion. Best to you in the contest


  • poppa
    October 1, 2008

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    Wow... powerful write... the victims of religion huh ? superb piece.... good luck in the contest


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    Ohh.. now I could go in many directions in the meaning of this! Intriguing write sis!!


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