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Love's Likelihood

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thorns
pierced
mortality
Love was born
the bleeding heart
cannot hold frozen hate

Author notes

Picture Prompt; 13 words
I wrote part of this as a comment to Grunt's Girl

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  • Grunts Girl gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    oh this is so interesting.. you know your comment never came through in my notes and I didnt know anything was on that poem page until i visited there today!!! grrrrr.
    there is such truth to this and power. I really like how it points upwards even to the light of truth

  • Neef Kykmytros
    October 4, 2008

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    Baie waar,
    meermale al gewens dit was nie so,

    maar dit is die lot en die geheim van die heelal.


  • PerVirtuous
    October 3, 2008

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    I love your comments. They have inspired, in my humble estimation, almost as many poems as Dalaney's breasts.


    If course you know I am being funny, but it is true.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 1, 2008
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    Deeply profound... x


  • MargaretG
    October 1, 2008

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    This resonates, the experience is in me too. A broken heart has more room, they say. Best of luck!


  • poppa
    October 1, 2008

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    Wonderful write... love the image of that moment creating love, excellent thoughts... good luck in the contest

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