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Standing in the storm of modern Earth

A poet without provenance
Nor petty word from pursed lips
No words of bitter vengeance
Are persued with pen tips
No longing nor lonely notions rest
Upon thin tree skin
With air in chest no beating breast
Could conjure what's within,

Sighless, soundless, silence still
'Cross this Muses breezeless ocean
Her lovely mouth open shrill
As ancient dust gathers motion

And all that we could be in he
In Gods gleaming eye
He exists not today we see
As children lay to die
For how can one of such glory
Stand by and watch the din?
And all the divinity that we ken
Is no longer let in
For minds are not foolish
And people do not refrain
In pain we see them disappear
    For all revered
    The bird, a cross
    The Albotross
    Round neck across
    The greed of cost
  Will hang just the same

Author notes

It's nice to finally have time to share my poetry

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  • Ana-Andrea
    October 13, 2008
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    Words used in the possessive need an apostrophe before the 's,' for example: Muse's and God's.
    Albotross should be Albatross.
    Some interesting thoughts and imagery here. Thanks for entering! Best wishes, BookGirl