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It's time...

So all that wonderful
age
not before long
When  joys  anew be heard

Author notes

see the unseen that which pleases your soul...

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 1, 2008

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    clever and creative, well written in 13 words and to the point you were trying to make. keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 1, 2008
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    Creatively grasping... x